Critique Thread

DeletedUser · May 18, 2012

^^ It was pleasing to look at.

please remember that is all that ever matters

nightblade.greyswandir · May 20, 2012

phlipster said:
Neither have you

And no good pre-mades, best to go it alone or with some friends if you want to play w63. good to see you haven't forgotten us ng

hahahaha, no time for sigs any more

i can't forget you or TW, that was great experience to be here all these years.

aqeelhussain17 said:
Master Of autoCAD makes a comeback eh?

I think there's that 13 (filled with baddies :x) , and Aeon (doesn't have much leader experience but have a good member count). They've stopped recruiting though. Other than them no decent tribes going for 63.

eh, just need some fun in good old TW. will chek them both.

thank you

DeletedUser102804 · May 24, 2012

DeletedUser92094 · May 25, 2012

^that's hot.

DeletedUser100345 · May 29, 2012

jalwis2007 said:

pretty nice
i only do not like the fx above the left side of his face
perhaps you also should add more action on the right side :icon_wink:

little animation :lol:
cnc plz

DeletedUser · Jun 4, 2012

h@rdcore said:
[SPOIL]pretty nice
i only do not like the fx above the left side of his face
perhaps you also should add more action on the right side :icon_wink:

little animation :lol:
cnc plz

[/SPOIL]

Not much to say really, it's a bit... Plain. The animation is nice, and is of course the focal, but the background is just so empty. A bit more in the background would help blend things together, as opposed to animation frames over a very average background.

Some practice.

DeletedUser102804 · Jun 4, 2012

h@rdcore said:
little animation :lol:
cnc plz

Depth, depth, depth.

This is probably one of the hardest things to do for an animated tag, but you've somehow got to get the background animated along with the rest of the tag.

This is a bit older one I collab'd on with a friend, but you'll notice how everything is animated on it.

DeletedUser100345 · Jun 4, 2012

jalwis2007 said:
Depth, depth, depth.

This is probably one of the hardest things to do for an animated tag, but you've somehow got to get the background animated along with the rest of the tag.

This is a bit older one I collab'd on with a friend, but you'll notice how everything is animated on it.

wow this is pretty nice
how do you animate the background?

DeletedUser · Jun 4, 2012

jalwis2007 said:
Depth, depth, depth.

This is probably one of the hardest things to do for an animated tag, but you've somehow got to get the background animated along with the rest of the tag.

This is a bit older one I collab'd on with a friend, but you'll notice how everything is animated on it.

Could do that with one hand tied behind my back type of easy stuff when with videos. BUT GIF IMAGES? OMG. Good job mate, nothing I can say to actually CnC this... It's like magic..! I'm going to learn that soon, i tell yah. Honest opinion: Animation is epic, but the colors arn't something I'm liking. Try converting the pics to Black, Blue, White and Red only with Gradient maps. Might look a bit Bold.

P.S takes 20 seconds or so to load. Try lowering the quality a bit.

DeletedUser · Jun 4, 2012

aqeelhussain17 said:
P.S takes 20 seconds or so to load. Try lowering the quality a bit.

If you have a slow connection, everything will be slow anyway. I didn't notice it at all. :icon_razz:

DeletedUser · Jun 4, 2012

harbinger297 said:
If you have a slow connection, everything will be slow anyway. I didn't notice it at all. :icon_razz:

8mbps, and downloading probably thats why. Not "20 sec" I just mean a bit slow to load. P:

DeletedUser · Jun 4, 2012

jalwis2007 said:
Depth, depth, depth.

This is probably one of the hardest things to do for an animated tag, but you've somehow got to get the background animated along with the rest of the tag.

This is a bit older one I collab'd on with a friend, but you'll notice how everything is animated on it.

Loving this, mate - can I ask what program you used for it?

DeletedUser102804 · Jun 4, 2012

Hashim1 said:
Loving this, mate - can I ask what program you used for it?

I did my work in PS, and my friend did it in After Effects (I think).

aqeelhussain17 said:
Could do that with one hand tied behind my back type of easy stuff when with videos. BUT GIF IMAGES? OMG. Good job mate, nothing I can say to actually CnC this... It's like magic..! I'm going to learn that soon, i tell yah. Honest opinion: Animation is epic, but the colors arn't something I'm liking. Try converting the pics to Black, Blue, White and Red only with Gradient maps. Might look a bit Bold.

P.S takes 20 seconds or so to load. Try lowering the quality a bit.

This was the .gif version, there was another version in .apng format which was much cleaner, but is only available for viewing if you have Opera or Firefox as your browser (which not everyone has).

DeletedUser · Jun 5, 2012

jalwis2007 said:
Depth, depth, depth.

This is probably one of the hardest things to do for an animated tag, but you've somehow got to get the background animated along with the rest of the tag.

This is a bit older one I collab'd on with a friend, but you'll notice how everything is animated on it.

prodigy is cool ;3
That one animation of him is awesome xD

DeletedUser · Jun 23, 2012

Made this sig using a tutorial on youtube...

and

Im happy with it seeing as it is one of my first siggies

im a newbie at graphics

Any Constructive Criticism would be appreciated

Thanks

Changed my forum name to back 2 back (B2B)

King Sean04 · Jun 26, 2012

My first tag in over a month :lol:

DeletedUser · Jun 26, 2012

TickTock... said:
Made this sig using a tutorial on youtube...

and

Im happy with it seeing as it is one of my first siggies im a newbie at graphics

Any Constructive Criticism would be appreciated
Thanks

Changed my forum name to back 2 back (B2B)

Tick tock Do you put the guy in the backround and then erase at different opacitys around the guy?
Quote:
Originally Posted by jalwis2007

Depth, depth, depth.

This is probably one of the hardest things to do for an animated tag, but you've somehow got to get the background animated along with the rest of the tag.

Do you have a premium account for uploading pictures. Because my animations are way to big (in file size) and not nearly as complicated.

DeletedUser · Jun 26, 2012

Werbenjagermanjensen said:
Tick tock Do you put the guy in the backround and then erase at different opacitys around the guy?

here is the tut

King Sean04 · Jun 26, 2012

TickTock... said:
Made this sig using a tutorial on youtube...

and

Im happy with it seeing as it is one of my first siggies im a newbie at graphics

Any Constructive Criticism would be appreciated
Thanks

Changed my forum name to back 2 back (B2B)

It's good for a first sig. I suggest doing more tutorials and use what you learn from them. Also, try not to center your focal in your sigs. Most of us, the ones I know, use the rule of thirds when creating a sig. Here is an example:

As you can see the places the lines cross are the place you want your focal point to be. As pointed to by the red arrows.

DeletedUser · Aug 2, 2012

My first time making something with cinema4d/adobe after effects

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cB2bGfob064&list=UUNW939oHJxHf_9cSeyVmh2A&index=1&feature=plcp

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