Discussion in 'Graphics' started by cyndaquilrocks, Jun 13, 2010.
Har, might wanna flip the duck because right now it reads 'save the bucks'
Other thank that it is an interesting piece that I like.
Good point myname (love that name btw).
Also if possible sharpen it a bit?
This little siggy of mine looks extremely basic/simple compared to most of your stuff, but I rendered the background directly out of a 3D program. Any feedback on composition would be nice. :icon_redface:
Legionary minus helmet is completely custom. The rest of it is either template or royalty-free material by other 3D artists.
Original render: http://s385.photobucket.com/albums/oo300/Imparus/?action=view¤t=carthage1_fin.png
Completely out of the blue but i was just looking around this forum and spotted this and i think it would look really good if you put her infront of a long corridor if you can kinda understand what im saying? (btw i know nothing...)
Collaboration between me and phil (he did most of it )
The BG is pretty epic but I think a more fitting render should be used. The render with the BG just doesn't work for me.
Angle her more to follow the flow. Now blend her into the background layers but using smudge layers over bits. Then spam C4Ds! :icon_smile:
Do something to the layer where you just used the pick tool.
Use another effect or smudge it so it flows with your C4Ds
Hows This i smugged instead this time and yeah i knoww the text is ugly
render is centered andbg is imo to blurred/smudged
kick font and think about a concept for your effectstocks
At the top of her forehead something is out of place.
Thats what I thought to :icon_cool:
I just did'nt wana say anything in case I was wrong :icon_rolleyes:
k, thx i think you mean the horizontal cut
thats ART!!! :icon_twisted:
i thought nobody would recognice, but ok the devil is in the detail
it is something different, so what is your whole impression? :icon_surprised:
The centered render doesn't particularly bother me but I'm sure the other will give you crap for it.
Now, it's not terrible overall, veyr simple and very clean - the best kinds of tags are always so. However, I think what you've done in the background is too obvious - the focal is just the resized background render ? So, try smudging the background (before blurring) a little more and you'll have something that looks much nicer. Maybe stick some text in there too. With regards to the color tone, overall, it feels unfinished. Try messing around with gradient maps and sources of lighting till you get something nice.
Overall though, not bad.
yeah the BG is just the render smudged then blurred i put one on 1 side and flipped the other hoeizantolly which gave me the hair again then i just use the gradient and blurred the sides of the reder for it to blend with the BG