Critique Thread

DeletedUser

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savetheducks.png


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DeletedUser

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Har, might wanna flip the duck because right now it reads 'save the bucks'

Jussayin.

Other thank that it is an interesting piece that I like.

Good Work.
 

DeletedUser81336

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Good point myname (love that name btw). :p
Also if possible sharpen it a bit?
 

DeletedUser

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RuSerious - not bad for your first/early one imo mate. quality of the images is good. Multiple focals and text placing though makes your eyes leap all over the place - its not really clear whats the main bit. Perhaps stick with the eye or stick with the blue girl and go from there....

trying something re smudging which i've never really done before. But i want to get away from the cartoony cut outs i've been using a lot recently. CnC please

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Completely out of the blue but i was just looking around this forum and spotted this and i think it would look really good if you put her infront of a long corridor if you can kinda understand what im saying? (btw i know nothing...)
 

DeletedUser

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The BG is pretty epic but I think a more fitting render should be used. The render with the BG just doesn't work for me.
 

DeletedUser

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Do something to the layer where you just used the pick tool.

Use another effect or smudge it so it flows with your C4Ds
 

DeletedUser100345

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render is centered andbg is imo to blurred/smudged
kick font and think about a concept for your effectstocks

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cnc plz

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DeletedUser101662

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Thats what I thought to :icon_cool:
I just did'nt wana say anything in case I was wrong :icon_rolleyes:
 

DeletedUser100345

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At the top of her forehead something is out of place.

Thats what I thought to :icon_cool:
I just did'nt wana say anything in case I was wrong :icon_rolleyes:
k, thx i think you mean the horizontal cut
thats ART!!! :icon_twisted:
i thought nobody would recognice, but ok the devil is in the detail
it is something different, so what is your whole impression? :icon_surprised:
 

DeletedUser

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The centered render doesn't particularly bother me but I'm sure the other will give you crap for it.

Now, it's not terrible overall, veyr simple and very clean - the best kinds of tags are always so. However, I think what you've done in the background is too obvious - the focal is just the resized background render ? So, try smudging the background (before blurring) a little more and you'll have something that looks much nicer. Maybe stick some text in there too. :) With regards to the color tone, overall, it feels unfinished. Try messing around with gradient maps and sources of lighting till you get something nice.

Overall though, not bad. :)
 

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yeah the BG is just the render smudged then blurred i put one on 1 side and flipped the other hoeizantolly which gave me the hair again then i just use the gradient and blurred the sides of the reder for it to blend with the BG
 
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