Critique Thread

Discussion in 'Graphics' started by cyndaquilrocks, Jun 13, 2010.

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  1. harbinger297

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  2. MyNameDoesntFi

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    Har, might wanna flip the duck because right now it reads 'save the bucks'

    Jussayin.

    Other thank that it is an interesting piece that I like.

    Good Work.
     
  3. Oscar the Grouch

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    Good point myname (love that name btw). :p
    Also if possible sharpen it a bit?
     
  4. yurtles

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    :eek: FI :)
     
  5. samulis

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    This little siggy of mine looks extremely basic/simple compared to most of your stuff, but I rendered the background directly out of a 3D program. Any feedback on composition would be nice. :icon_redface:

    Legionary minus helmet is completely custom. The rest of it is either template or royalty-free material by other 3D artists.

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  6. Completely out of the blue but i was just looking around this forum and spotted this and i think it would look really good if you put her infront of a long corridor if you can kinda understand what im saying? (btw i know nothing...)
     
  7. harbinger297

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    Collaboration between me and phil (he did most of it :p)
     
  8. etan115

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    The BG is pretty epic but I think a more fitting render should be used. The render with the BG just doesn't work for me.
     
  9. mattoematt

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    Angle her more to follow the flow. Now blend her into the background layers but using smudge layers over bits. Then spam C4Ds! :icon_smile:
     
  10. bump
     
  11. MyNameDoesntFi

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    Do something to the layer where you just used the pick tool.

    Use another effect or smudge it so it flows with your C4Ds
     
  12. Hows This i smugged instead this time and yeah i knoww the text is ugly

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  13. h@rdcore

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    render is centered andbg is imo to blurred/smudged
    kick font and think about a concept for your effectstocks

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  14. MiiStEr man

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    At the top of her forehead something is out of place.
     
  15. i.lolz.

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    Thats what I thought to :icon_cool:
    I just did'nt wana say anything in case I was wrong :icon_rolleyes:
     
  16. h@rdcore

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    k, thx i think you mean the horizontal cut
    thats ART!!! :icon_twisted:
    i thought nobody would recognice, but ok the devil is in the detail
    it is something different, so what is your whole impression? :icon_surprised:
     
  17. The centered render doesn't particularly bother me but I'm sure the other will give you crap for it.

    Now, it's not terrible overall, veyr simple and very clean - the best kinds of tags are always so. However, I think what you've done in the background is too obvious - the focal is just the resized background render ? So, try smudging the background (before blurring) a little more and you'll have something that looks much nicer. Maybe stick some text in there too. :) With regards to the color tone, overall, it feels unfinished. Try messing around with gradient maps and sources of lighting till you get something nice.

    Overall though, not bad. :)
     
  18. yeah the BG is just the render smudged then blurred i put one on 1 side and flipped the other hoeizantolly which gave me the hair again then i just use the gradient and blurred the sides of the reder for it to blend with the BG