oops i did it again so kill me?

DeletedUser99229

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thoughts?
 
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DeletedUser65288

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I have trouble reading the red S starting each word. Try moving the text to his inner thigh where it is black/dark blue maybe?
 

DeletedUser108293

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The S cant be read very well but very nice quality and done very well. Congrats
 

DeletedUser

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Or make the "S" ,"S "."B", different color ... that might help too..
 

DeletedUser

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agreed. the red font is hard to read. besides that...not bad
 
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