Sir Cornish - The man with the plan!

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Nice PnP, but I'd agree at about 7/10. It was pure comedic value rather than any aimed PnP. Usually, if you make a PnP about a tribe/player, but could replace the subject person/tribe with any other mass recruiter/fail tribe and the result being that the topic still makes sense, then you need to reconsider and edit. Make it a bit more specific, e.g. include a conversation with Sir Cornish, or perhaps print screens of tribe forums etc. from espionage.

I can't really put my finger on exactly how to improve it, I think it just requires more conviction. Nice first PnP though, and probably better than anything I'll pull off. :)
 
lol, funny stuff=D Loved it^^ Also thanks again for the sig Hard=]
 
Lol 8/10. Good work. Maybe corhish will prevail this time... yeah right.
 
Robocripe said:
Nice PnP, but I'd agree at about 7/10. It was pure comedic value rather than any aimed PnP. Usually, if you make a PnP about a tribe/player, but could replace the subject person/tribe with any other mass recruiter/fail tribe and the result being that the topic still makes sense, then you need to reconsider and edit. Make it a bit more specific, e.g. include a conversation with Sir Cornish, or perhaps print screens of tribe forums etc. from espionage.

I can't really put my finger on exactly how to improve it, I think it just requires more conviction. Nice first PnP though, and probably better than anything I'll pull off. :)
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Thankyou for honest feedback, I was just bored so yeah I could change the tribe in it and still have the same value :P
 
It was decent - especially for a first attempt.

That being said, I think all of those jumping on the bandwagon saying "Bravo! 10/10" really need to rethink it. 10/10 suggests perfection, that absolutely nothing could be improved upon - that this is the best of the best and nothing could possibly beat it. Really? There is always room for improvement.

It was entertaining (which I assume is what you are going for?) but in the way of Politics it really had very little value as it is such an early world and we all know what Sir Cornish is like anyway. In regards to Propaganda, again, very little value - except for the (subtle) attempt to put your own tribe in there and make them appear better with the narration you placed upon them, and then telling us how poor Sir Cornish / his tribe is - which we already know and no-one would dispute (except Sir cornish himself).

I'm not really sure what to offer in the way of advice, because of how early this world is. Generally if you're going to make PnP (Politics and Propaganda - which this really is not, as explained above) you want to have some factual evidence, screenshots, so on and so forth. There just needs to be more substance (which will naturally occur as the world matures).

Just my two cents.
 
Notoriety* said:
It was decent - especially for a first attempt.

That being said, I think all of those jumping on the bandwagon saying "Bravo! 10/10" really need to rethink it. 10/10 suggests perfection, that absolutely nothing could be improved upon - that this is the best of the best and nothing could possibly beat it. Really? There is always room for improvement.

It was entertaining (which I assume is what you are going for?) but in the way of Politics it really had very little value as it is such an early world and we all know what Sir Cornish is like anyway. In regards to Propaganda, again, very little value - except for the (subtle) attempt to put your own tribe in there and make them appear better with the narration you placed upon them, and then telling us how poor Sir Cornish / his tribe is - which we already know and no-one would dispute (except Sir cornish himself).

I'm not really sure what to offer in the way of advice, because of how early this world is. Generally if you're going to make PnP (Politics and Propaganda - which this really is not, as explained above) you want to have some factual evidence, screenshots, so on and so forth. There just needs to be more substance (which will naturally occur as the world matures).

Just my two cents.
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Thanks for the honesty, I know this world is undeveloped but I wanted to make a post with the kind of PnP feel to it and see the response, it was merely for entertainment but I understand all your points and will make sure I read over them again before I post any real tribe vs tribe PnP,
Thanks again :)
 
Ever get the feeling some people read way too much into things? :icon_rolleyes:

I thought this was a point and laugh thread.
Not a serious PnP with hard facts thread.

Then again, I suppose it could be both? :icon_neutral:
 
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I Was Pushed. said:
Ever get the feeling some people read way too much into things? :icon_rolleyes:

I thought this was a point and laugh thread.
Not a serious PnP with hard facts thread.

Then again, I suppose it could be both? :icon_neutral:
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*points and laughs*.

Ha. :icon_redface:
 
Well, I suppose that makes a change from people doing it to you.
So go ahead. :lol:
 
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