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Transmission found, transmission enables….. If you are hearing this than all is lost. I am Lt. Kelly of the US space and military marine corp. About ten years ago the military discovered something unknown floating among the earth’s atmosphere . In-between the debris that surrounded the planet a creature floated frozen solid from the temperature of the darkness that is space. The creature in question was secure in a nearby space station. Within a month all transmissions had completely stopped from the space station. The military quickly became concerned and sent a strike team to find out why all transmission had stopped. When me and my commanding officers landed in the shuttle bay landing area the first thing we noticed was that the station was in complete silence. Not a sound could be heard it was as if everything even the station itself had shut completely down. We made our way to central command. Along the way we noticed along the walls a sticky like substance almost like a living web had covered most if not all of the station. At the command bridge once my commanding officer active the power switch a hologram of the leading scientist on the station appeared. He was in a panic and he looked as if he was sick. His message as we watched was that we all feared. The creature according to the scientist was a queen. After it had defrosted in the holding bay it start to reproduce and quickly. Within days the holding bay was covered in the web like substance that we had seen coming in and within weeks eggs hidden in the substance started to appear. Toward the end of the first three weeks the eggs had hatched and some how the alien creatures which when hatched look like hands of some sort were all over the ship. They had in a attempt to stop the creatures from spreading farther had separated the different compartments, but to no avail. They spread quickly, but unlike what the scientist expected them to dl all they did was attach themselves to their preys face than after a day or two fall off and die. The lead scientist continued with his explanation as they soon discovered after a close examination of the creatures remains these hand like creatures were on carriers and soon everyone who had been attacked by the creature were starting to complain of pains in their abdomen. Within hours we found bodies, their rib cage bursting from the inside outwards and the person dead. This is where the scientist transmission ended as a scream could be heard in the background and a black bug like creature with a no eyes appeared on screen. The commanding officer at the time looked at each of us in horror as deep in the ship we heard something, something that sent shivers down are spines. A shriek unlike anything heard before. The commanding officer quickly gave orders for us to retreat to the landing bay, but at the time well we didn’t really have time. We started running back toward our shuttle only half of us made it. I barely made it myself as I watched in horror with wide eyes as the men disappeared into the darkness and something slithered or crawled along the ceiling above us. When we reached the shuttle we thought w had made it home clear. We were sadly mistaken.
Once we reached our home planet of earth we were suddenly arrested and put into jail cells they said we had killed off everyone in the station, but that was only a lie they used us as cover up. A few months later I heard reports from my cell of the same station had crashed due to technically problems. Within days of the crash, reports started to spill in from the news as black bug like creatures started to appear throughout the nearby towns and cities. The military was now at a loss. With the crash of the station the creatures later dubbed as Xenomorphs or those like me who faced them before, bugs. The following days that followed were a living nightmare. I was quickly released from my cell along with anyone else who could fight or have fought these creatures before, but to no avail we failed. They spread quickly throughout the world like insects. Nothing we did stopped them. With the planet in chaos we were desperate. Our hope came in the form of another visitor from space, creatures who wore strange armor. They hunted like nothing we have never seen before. They were strong, stealthy, and knew how to take out the Xenomorphs, but these hunters we called Predators were are enemies. They hunted both human survivors and the bugs.
After months of struggling against both races the Predators managed to take out the queen of the aliens. We humans gave a breath of relief for with the queen’s death the predators would leave the planet and the Xenomorphs would be in chaos. We were wrong. A new queen rose to take the place of the old one, but this queen was different. This queen wasn’t even pure alien or anything it was large, and practically invincible. Even the predators fell to hr might as her rage covered the entire planet her shrieks could be heard for miles. None of us stood a chance. I repeat if your reading this than all is lost, we are going to attempt to use the few remaining undercover bombs to take out half the planet we hope it works if it doesn’t than the codes to the missile bay are recorded along with this transmission. You are our last hope Lt. Kelly out….
This happened within a few years, within a century the planet had completely fallen under the new queens control. Humans and Predators alike lived underground in fear of the surface world and what inhabited it. Now we come to the present day. The cities are in ruins, heroes few and now we draw your attention to the city of New York.
 
In the ruins of the city a Xenomorph sat in the shadows watching the area around it. The new queen had ordered him to investigate a possible new sitting of more prey in this barren wasteland and he obeyed without a second thought. He hissed lowly as he noticed something moving in the shadows and stalked closer to it hoping to please his new queen with good news. That was his last though as he felt something pierce through his chest. A snarl could be heard and another creature something different from the other Xenomorphs stepped out from the shadows. It was a predalien a sub species of Xenomorph made from a predator host. He had been stalking this city for some time now suspecting that the new queen may be hidden nearby. He unlike other aliens still maintained his host memories and intelligences. He hated the new queen for the fact she thought she could control anyone and it was his goal to do what so many others have failed to do, destroy her and her so called empire. So restarts the Alien Vs Predator War, but this time the aliens have a threat from their own.
 
Present day… Year 2226...In the ruins of New York City.
A soft hiss could be heard from under the cities pipes as a creature moved through the sewers quietly keeping in the shadows as he moved. His tail twitched as he moved along the ceiling and he came to a complete stop and looked around. Though he had no eyes he could easily see nothing had lived down here for some time now or for that matter could ever live down here. Up at the surface he tilted his head back and heard a building or what was left of one crumble to the ground under the fierce wind. It was the winter months and a fierce blizzard had hit the city sometime last night while he had been resting. Being a creature who hates the cold he had been forced deeper under the city to find shelter and so far all his search had found was some old subway tunnels and these sewers. While normally he would have gladly stayed in the sewers he was trying to stay in hiding for a reason and the sewers is the first place they would look for one of his kind. He hissed and continued along his way. It has been some months since he had moved to this area of city and since than he has been noticing a increase in the queen’s drones moving through the landscape. They were looking for something though he wasn’t entirely sure exactly what it was they were looking for. It irked him a bit that the queen had so far managed to always end up exactly where he was as if she was following him for no apparent reason. In truth he was getting extremely annoyed and for being part alien and part predator it wasn’t settling well.
He paused in his steps and looked around curiously. His dreadlocks moved silently as they could as he moved his head and watched the area closely. Moving his tail slowly around him he coiled into somewhat of a ball and moved into the shadows as a group of alien warriors passed through the area without skipping a beat they were gone just as they had arrived. The predalien watched them curiously as he knew better to think that any alien would rush through something so carelessly. Most aliens by nature were cautious. He shifted his claws some as he moved somewhat into the light waiting for something, he wasn’t sure what, but something to come. After a few minutes of standing there perfectly still he relaxed and moved into the open as thunder boomed in the distance suddenly.
He looked up at the sky and hissed silently as he watched dark clouds slowly start to cover the once hazy blueish sky. With another boom of thunder lightening could be seen in the distance as it danced along the sky and along the ground. He gave a shake of his head and moved down below the debris that covered the city’s ground as it started to rain lightly. As the day slowly turned to night more thunder could be heard as he watched lightening move across the city. The rain started to come down harder as even his little bit of shelter wasn’t helping him keep out of the rain. With a sigh or something that was supposed to sound like a sigh he moved from his protection from the weather and moved along the jagged path of buildings that littered the ground. He hated the rain he didn’t know why, but he hated it and the fact a winter storm was so early was bothering him some since weather around here was usual predictable. As he ran through the city he watched other aliens who either lived nearby or had stopped for the time being, moving in the shadows as they avoided the now freezing cold rain that was pelting his head.
 

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I don't think i need to go into a explanation of this forum now do I? unless your a idoit which i doubt.
 

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this alien vs pred i got the game yesterday

but the marines are my prefered class
 

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Transmission found, transmission enables….. If you are hearing this than all is lost. I am Lt. Kelly of the US space and military marine corp. About ten years ago the military discovered something unknown floating among the earth’s atmosphere . In-between the debris that surrounded the planet a creature floated frozen solid from the temperature of the darkness that is space. The creature in question was secure in a nearby space station. Within a month all transmissions had completely stopped [spoil]from the space station. The military quickly became concerned and sent a strike team to find out why all transmission had stopped. When me and my commanding officers landed in the shuttle bay landing area the first thing we noticed was that the station was in complete silence. Not a sound could be heard it was as if everything even the station itself had shut completely down. We made our way to central command. Along the way we noticed along the walls a sticky like substance almost like a living web had covered most if not all of the station. At the command bridge once my commanding officer active the power switch a hologram of the leading scientist on the station appeared. He was in a panic and he looked as if he was sick. His message as we watched was that we all feared. The creature according to the scientist was a queen. After it had defrosted in the holding bay it start to reproduce and quickly. Within days the holding bay was covered in the web like substance that we had seen coming in and within weeks eggs hidden in the substance started to appear. Toward the end of the first three weeks the eggs had hatched and some how the alien creatures which when hatched look like hands of some sort were all over the ship. They had in a attempt to stop the creatures from spreading farther had separated the different compartments, but to no avail. They spread quickly, but unlike what the scientist expected them to dl all they did was attach themselves to their preys face than after a day or two fall off and die. The lead scientist continued with his explanation as they soon discovered after a close examination of the creatures remains these hand like creatures were on carriers and soon everyone who had been attacked by the creature were starting to complain of pains in their abdomen. Within hours we found bodies, their rib cage bursting from the inside outwards and the person dead. This is where the scientist transmission ended as a scream could be heard in the background and a black bug like creature with a no eyes appeared on screen. The commanding officer at the time looked at each of us in horror as deep in the ship we heard something, something that sent shivers down are spines. A shriek unlike anything heard before. The commanding officer quickly gave orders for us to retreat to the landing bay, but at the time well we didn’t really have time. We started running back toward our shuttle only half of us made it. I barely made it myself as I watched in horror with wide eyes as the men disappeared into the darkness and something slithered or crawled along the ceiling above us. When we reached the shuttle we thought w had made it home clear. We were sadly mistaken.
Once we reached our home planet of earth we were suddenly arrested and put into jail cells they said we had killed off everyone in the station, but that was only a lie they used us as cover up. A few months later I heard reports from my cell of the same station had crashed due to technically problems. Within days of the crash, reports started to spill in from the news as black bug like creatures started to appear throughout the nearby towns and cities. The military was now at a loss. With the crash of the station the creatures later dubbed as Xenomorphs or those like me who faced them before, bugs. The following days that followed were a living nightmare. I was quickly released from my cell along with anyone else who could fight or have fought these creatures before, but to no avail we failed. They spread quickly throughout the world like insects. Nothing we did stopped them. With the planet in chaos we were desperate. Our hope came in the form of another visitor from space, creatures who wore strange armor. They hunted like nothing we have never seen before. They were strong, stealthy, and knew how to take out the Xenomorphs, but these hunters we called Predators were are enemies. They hunted both human survivors and the bugs.
After months of struggling against both races the Predators managed to take out the queen of the aliens. We humans gave a breath of relief for with the queen’s death the predators would leave the planet and the Xenomorphs would be in chaos. We were wrong. A new queen rose to take the place of the old one, but this queen was different. This queen wasn’t even pure alien or anything it was large, and practically invincible. Even the predators fell to hr might as her rage covered the entire planet her shrieks could be heard for miles. None of us stood a chance. I repeat if your reading this than all is lost, we are going to attempt to use the few remaining undercover bombs to take out half the planet we hope it works if it doesn’t than the codes to the missile bay are recorded along with this transmission. You are our last hope Lt. Kelly out….
This happened within a few years, within a century the planet had completely fallen under the new queens control. Humans and Predators alike lived underground in fear of the surface world and what inhabited it. Now we come to the present day. The cities are in ruins, heroes few and now we draw your attention to the city of New York.
 
In the ruins of the city a Xenomorph sat in the shadows watching the area around it. The new queen had ordered him to investigate a possible new sitting of more prey in this barren wasteland and he obeyed without a second thought. He hissed lowly as he noticed something moving in the shadows and stalked closer to it hoping to please his new queen with good news. That was his last though as he felt something pierce through his chest. A snarl could be heard and another creature something different from the other Xenomorphs stepped out from the shadows. It was a predalien a sub species of Xenomorph made from a predator host. He had been stalking this city for some time now suspecting that the new queen may be hidden nearby. He unlike other aliens still maintained his host memories and intelligences. He hated the new queen for the fact she thought she could control anyone and it was his goal to do what so many others have failed to do, destroy her and her so called empire. So restarts the Alien Vs Predator War, but this time the aliens have a threat from their own.
 
Present day… Year 2226...In the ruins of New York City.
A soft hiss could be heard from under the cities pipes as a creature moved through the sewers quietly keeping in the shadows as he moved. His tail twitched as he moved along the ceiling and he came to a complete stop and looked around. Though he had no eyes he could easily see nothing had lived down here for some time now or for that matter could ever live down here. Up at the surface he tilted his head back and heard a building or what was left of one crumble to the ground under the fierce wind. It was the winter months and a fierce blizzard had hit the city sometime last night while he had been resting. Being a creature who hates the cold he had been forced deeper under the city to find shelter and so far all his search had found was some old subway tunnels and these sewers. While normally he would have gladly stayed in the sewers he was trying to stay in hiding for a reason and the sewers is the first place they would look for one of his kind. He hissed and continued along his way. It has been some months since he had moved to this area of city and since than he has been noticing a increase in the queen’s drones moving through the landscape. They were looking for something though he wasn’t entirely sure exactly what it was they were looking for. It irked him a bit that the queen had so far managed to always end up exactly where he was as if she was following him for no apparent reason. In truth he was getting extremely annoyed and for being part alien and part predator it wasn’t settling well.
He paused in his steps and looked around curiously. His dreadlocks moved silently as they could as he moved his head and watched the area closely. Moving his tail slowly around him he coiled into somewhat of a ball and moved into the shadows as a group of alien warriors passed through the area without skipping a beat they were gone just as they had arrived. The predalien watched them curiously as he knew better to think that any alien would rush through something so carelessly. Most aliens by nature were cautious. He shifted his claws some as he moved somewhat into the light waiting for something, he wasn’t sure what, but something to come. After a few minutes of standing there perfectly still he relaxed and moved into the open as thunder boomed in the distance suddenly.
He looked up at the sky and hissed silently as he watched dark clouds slowly start to cover the once hazy blueish sky. With another boom of thunder lightening could be seen in the distance as it danced along the sky and along the ground. He gave a shake of his head and moved down below the debris that covered the city’s ground as it started to rain lightly. As the day slowly turned to night more thunder could be heard as he watched lightening move across the city. The rain started to come down harder as even his little bit of shelter wasn’t helping him keep out of the rain. With a sigh or something that was supposed to sound like a sigh he moved from his protection from the weather and moved along the jagged path of buildings that littered the ground. He hated the rain he didn’t know why, but he hated it and the fact a winter storm was so early was bothering him some since weather around here was usual predictable. As he ran through the city he watched other aliens who either lived nearby or had stopped for the time being, moving in the shadows as they avoided the now freezing cold rain that was pelting his head.[/spoil]

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Read everything up to the spoiler, just to long.
 

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Yeah I agree, it needs to be separated into shorter paragraphs, color coded or something.
 

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Umm when i actually write it into book format if you don't like reading that one you will all hate Darkness lol
 

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The battle overhead was reaching it’s peak as the cries of injured men and lost children as well as the crows and vultures which surrounded the bloodied and smoke covered battle field. A small child sat in the back of a burnt down hut watching the orange flame covered sky his eyes wide as he tried his best not to cry and alert anyone who could possible harm him to his location. A solitary black crown like the rest of his kind except for his feathers, they were truly odd not the greasing smooth like texture the others had as if they were constantly dirty, but rather rougher and cleaner almost. It’s eyes though is what really made the boy look up and stare at it. The eyes were that of something more than a bird almost as if reptilian in appearance. It gave a caw and watched the frighten kid shiver from the shrew voice and scurry deeper into his little hiding hole at the same time shooing the bird away or attempting to. The crow gave another caw before spreading it’s wings and leaping into the air sailing with the wind as it headed toward the fire covered lands that was once the great village of Mare. It’s eyes observed the wreckage below it flying through or around the black clouds that covered the area before diving down and landing perfectly on it’s talons in the middle of a broken fence post. It’s eyes glowed softly and with a soft hiss the crow vanished and a creature no more than 4 to 7 feet in height stood her snot pointed into the air as her silver white like scales danced in the flames her wings spread out as she eyed her surroundings waiting patiently. As the cries of fallen men and creatures continued the sky blossomed with sparks and the sound of ringing of steal hitting steal as more sparks jumped in the sky. The small creature groomed her wings before turning to give a small chirp her eyes were swirling in sorrow as she chirped again and ducked her head ashamed before hearing the sound of familiar footsteps hitting the burnt hard, ash covered ground. With a smile on her face she looked up and chirped thankfully at the figure whose bright white hair and light grey eyes dark as they were a moment ago still managed to make a small smile for his best friend and bond mate. They turned to peer up at the sky and heard the roar of something in the distance and the shout of men as swords could be seen raised in the distance in victory. The man shook his head and with a sad chirp the small creature bound onto his shoulder as the man started toward the forest the creature could only stare back as her thoughts whirled in terminal.

Chaos is the world’s greatest strength and yet at the same time it’s greatest threat. A wise man once told Rydan that, but that wise man and that particular day were far from his head as he pushed through the underbrush and growled out in frustration. It was a hot and sticky day and like always the jungle refused to give him any leeway in hopes of making it through before the chilly night set in. He rolled his eyes as he heard a soft chirp from above as a small white creature sat watching him curiously scowling somewhat. Rydan glared at his life partner who was in the form of a small mouse at the moment and in a attempt to get free from the weed underneath him he fell over a root that happen to be standing in his way though he doubt the tree had done it intentionally it didn’t stop him from using every colorful word he had in his vocabulary spending 20 amusing minutes cussing the root out. Well amusing to Saber who sat back on her hunches giggling. Rydan ran out of words to use before pulling himself out of the mud and glared at her before rolling his eyes and mumbling as he headed back into the woods ignoring Saber hoping she’ll disappear somewhere and sulk for a few hours till he was in a better mood or got out of this god forsaken forest which at the moment was seriously pissing him off. All it seemed to do was create a giant burden for him and he could for the hell of it could not figure out why in the world of all the places to hide a god forsaken love sick princess would run here. While yes it seemed like a peaceful place at first and the outer woods along the edge of the deep forest were indeed used for peaceful events such as the king’s annual picnics and events that celebrate one thing or another. To Rydan it all made no sense not anymore anyway. Back when he was a kid he used to love waking up bright and early in the mornings his eyes wide with excitement as the idea of a bright sunny cool day at the monthly festivals back in his old village where he grew up. He cringed and stopped looking down with flushed cheeks ashamed with himself. The war had lasted over 10 years and in the process of it he had not only lost those close to him plus the love of his life, but his very own compassion for people as he remembered the battles and the many people dieing all cause one king couldn’t keep his hands to himself and mistook the other king’s daughter as one of his sluts or as he called them “pleasers”. The term he had used disgusted Rydan even now way after the war when he himself had seen the king’s death body before him his sword bloody with the king’s warm blood. He remembered tossing the sword aside in disgust as he realized that even after all he had done the fighting continued and more and more brave yet foolish people died. It shook him deeply as he took in a sharp breath and tried to throw the thoughts away hoping to bury them under years of repressed memories and time.

Rydan sighed as he pulled himself from the mud and headed deeper into the forest his grey eyes watching the surrounding area clearly trying to pick up any movement in the underbrush. It bothered him even though he had to do that he was sitting here in this forest once more looking for like all his bounties lately looking for some silly princess who decide to run away cause of a pointless arranged marriage that probably wouldn’t last more than a few years before either she killed her so called husband or ran away or he killed her in a drunken rage. Saber who was hoping along the branches behind him rolled her eyes at his thinking chirping softly. He stopped and raised a eyebrow looking back at her as a question flashed in his head from her. He spoke mildly in a voice much softer than his age would suggest. “Why am I thinking that cause it is true anymore the world is full of morons and idiots and all the people do instead of honorable work is get drunk and use girls like slaves.” Saber sighed and shook her head softly at him another question popped through her head into his. He sighed as he was just about to start moving again when the question flashed in his mind eye all he could do was look at her. “You know sometimes I wonder why your so persistent you see the world as clearly as I do and you remember what happen cause of human kinds greed what makes you think it is any different with him gone? Or with the council members laying in their own poll of blood all these years what makes you think anything has changed for the better instead of getting worse like I see it?” He stepped up to her and looked right in her eyes. “What makes you think your right or I’m right for all we both know we both can be wrong” Saber looked at him ashamed at the same time in sorrow for he was right at the same time he was wrong but he had been so scared by the war nothing anyone did seemed to pull him out of this state. Rydan peered at her with a sigh and gave a rare soft smile that he only showed to her. “I’m sorry I really am your just as much right as I am but we are all we have left let us please stop this bickering and find this princess so we can go hoe and eat I’m starving and I know you are just as well.” She gave a soft chirp and giggled some nodding as her eyes swirled lightly and she landed gently on his shoulder getting comfortable as she wrapped her long tail around his neck and they pushed on into the wild wilderness.
 

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Actualyl sevral diffrent stories only one of my books to be is close to be finished these others are ideas. Beside this is for everyone to pot it worked in world 46.
 

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Lol, these are sample ideas of possible novels. And i tried it in world 46 and people enjoyed it there and I have nothing else to do till the world starts.
 
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