Wonderful Poems

DeletedUser

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Ladies and Gentlemen,

I thought I would get everyone entertained with a little poetry.

Watch out for da axes,
for they will make you pay your taxes,
watch out for da rams,
for they will make your village turn into sands,
watch out for da lc cavalry,
for they will eat all of your celery,
but most importantly,
watch out for da scouts,
for they will see whats on abouts!

There is my little rhyme of the day, made up in less than 5mins. Not very good i must admit but its a start :D

Your turn :)

As always, restreign all SPAM from my topics. Thank you in advance!
 

DeletedUser

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You tried to make a poem,
But really, your creative juices werent flowing.
Mistake after mistake
You didnt give my eyes a break.
I didnt mean to troll but you left yourself open wide,
An old member of Horde, surely that hurts your pride.

People insult DA
but really they hate Fray
Four rim wars they started
Already two have departed
The two that remain,
They have yet to feel our pain
So when they too are gone and all the haters look like fools
It will be us that are trolling on you.

Pretty bad but meh... No offence intended just a meaningless poem. Dont flame unless you put it in a poem!
 
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DeletedUser

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I'm a very big poet lol. here is four poems written by me. enjoy

[spoil]My heart is in pain; when I think of your name; there is no one to blame but myself. I tried to push you away; guilty I feel for I see I am hurting you still; shameful I must say. I hope you’re happy even though I am not but my feelings are beyond repair for me to care about my happiness. Blessed are those who care about others but when I say those words I shutter. For me I am not blessed but instead cursed for all I bring to those I love is death. I can surely say I loved you and I truly do but you split my heart in two... you pushed me away...

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For now I see the demon inside telling my heart a lie to have me grow in anger no longer caring for the danger I have put on my head ill lay you to rest when you try to fix me. Gone for now I’ll reappear when you don’t want nor need me most so my demons can awaken once more and break down your door to have my ugly face reared in once more. Forgotten now it seems my demons have deserted me. lonely I feel for they were the only ones I could count on to be still and be there for me.


crystal tears

The love I felt for you;
Forever in pain;
As you ripped the life away;
Now it’s all cold memories that I have left;

Now I walk away leaving you behind;
Trying to forget the feeling you once embedded in me;
Trying to be a ghost in this lonely life;
No longer knowing what I want for sure;

Holding back the tears;
Remembering your soft black hair;
Drop down in shame;
Wanting to die for the pain;

I won't feel this feeling anymore;
Pushing everyone out of my life;
All because of you;
I turned my back on the truth.

snow

the snow was beautiful in the night sky;
but yet so lonely;
the snow reminded me of her;
just like the snow she was soft;
a flower if you will;
a hint of sadness in her eyes;
just like the snow she fell;
at winters end the snow was gone;
just like the snow she was too;
but out the window an angel;
the angel was her;
she held the last bit of snow;
she kissed it;
then blew it away;
and said "we will be together again one day."[/spoil]
 
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DeletedUser

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Some say my poems aren't worth the telling,
I say your flaws mask the whole thing,
why criticize the deeds of others,
with your arrogance once forbidden by your mothers?

Sure, my poems aren't great,
but they definetly aren't given to me on a plate!
My brain might be slow and I think I'm retarded,
But I blame that solely on the people whom I discarded.

Yay! I made a bigger one this time. This is actually fun lol! :D
 

DeletedUser

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Innov are red
Fray are blue
Cw are dead
And we are coming for you
 

DeletedUser

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roflcopterchris said:
Innov are red
Fray are blue
Cw are dead
And we are coming for you
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I was attempting to find a rhyme,
but couldn't find the word that chimed,
you are so lazys,
to come up with those phrases,
that I can justify my errors,
without any care.

Yeh sorry wasn't very good but yours wasn't either :p

original version:
Roses are red,
violets are blue,
I took your village,
WTF you gonna do?
 

DeletedUser98475

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Villages are mine
Yours too, In time.
My troops counts are high
And yours are about to die
We are wiping you out
And sniping you out
And nuking you out
so for us theirs no doubt.
You gonna Hit tht delete

:D

Cruddy i know
 

DeletedUser

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lord duhaime said:
Villages are mine
Yours too, In time.
My troops counts are high
And yours are about to die
We are wiping you out
And sniping you out
And nuking you out
so for us theirs no doubt.
You gonna Hit tht delete

:D

Cruddy i know
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would be better with maybe 1 out and words that sound like out with the same meaning:) have another go that had very great potential!:icon_wink:
 

DeletedUser

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bernard 2485 said:
Some say my poems aren't worth the telling,
I say your flaws mask the whole thing,
why criticize the deeds of others,
with your arrogance once forbidden by your mothers?

Sure, my poems aren't great,
but they definetly aren't given to me on a plate!
My brain might be slow and I think I'm retarded,
But I blame that solely on the people whom I discarded.

Yay! I made a bigger one this time. This is actually fun lol! :D
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Though your mistakes are still many
Ill give you credit for trying
For what is the busker without that first penny?
We sit and write poems though our troops may be dying
Another wasted 5 minutes I could of spent faking


Ill add to it later =L
 

DeletedUser

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bernard dont you want to coplay us? you seem to have loads of free time. :)
 

DeletedUser

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uhakem said:
bernard dont you want to coplay us? you seem to have loads of free time. :)
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Haha i seem to be offered so many spots these days :D But for now I stay with what I got...:)

Activity is a must,
in order to get the timing just.
Loyalty is vital,
to be able to finish the battle.
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.
.
.
will finish when i have time...
 

DeletedUser

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This is a poem i wrote about Fray & DA....

Fray and DA.

There once was a bitch named DA.
Fray rode DA every day.
DA players did quit
so Fray took up the sit
 
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DeletedUser

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the topci is called wonderfull poems. your is not even funny, and it's all about respect it lacks. probably the post should be deleted also :)
 

DeletedUser

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Land of the Dead

It's in the Land of the Dead they now dwell
The fallen lords of the barbarian hordes,
dreaming of giving Area Hell
instead they've played their final chords.

Their voices will be heard nevermore
as their chance to reach the core
It's in the Land of the Dead they now dwell
W55 has proven to be their Hell.
 

DeletedUser

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zen. said:
the topci is called wonderfull poems. your is not even funny, and it's all about respect it lacks. probably the post should be deleted also :)
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Fray do not deserve respect. and i have been told my poem was kick ass by my tribe mates, they are the people that matter :)
 

DeletedUser

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Panamax. said:
Fray do not deserve respect. and i have been told my poem was kick ass by my tribe mates, they are the people that matter :)
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Biased as you're a tribemate? I think so. From a 3rd party perspective like Zen, your poem is terrible and disgusting which frankly, should be deleted.
 

DeletedUser

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Why dont we try a collective poem? Each person writes one line at a time.

Rhyme a b a b?

Ill start:

This is a poem written by the players...
 
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