Critique Thread

[DeletedUser104802]

Hows it?

By the way,im Shak.3.eL,joining back after a long time!

 

[DeletedUser96141]

Hows it?

By the way,im Shak.3.eL,joining back after a long time!

hey Shak!
well in my opinion it is too busy on the sides which takes attention from the focal. A bit of smudging or darkening should be done ...
And why dont you use your olld username?

 

[DeletedUser104802]

ehh my saved data from opera gone and i forgot my pw and the email i was using for it

 

[DeletedUser104802]

 

[DeletedUser]

Both of your tags are really messy.
Your colours are kinda bad.. ;s Don't use like 10 colours in one tag. 2 is a good number of colours
Both of your tags are also LQ / Oversharpened, fix that.
Kill that text, because it doesn't fit in your tag.

Try to work on those things and your tags wil be a lot better

 

[DeletedUser104802]

thanks mate

 

[DeletedUser]

thanks mate

my pleasure

 

[DeletedUser92094]

Napoli's criticism of too many colors rolls on my agenda also, but i will admit.
You're pretty good at using many, many colors !

 

[DeletedUser]

Now that the BOTG is over, I'm curious what people have to say about my piece.

 

[DeletedUser]

Where's the sprite?
Might be my getting blind, but I don't see it xD

 

[DeletedUser]

I believe Lituya meant the BOTG

 

[DeletedUser]

I believe Lituya meant the BOTG

oow ok xD
my bad

 

[DeletedUser]

I'd just posted elsewhere and used the acronym "SOTW" (I just typed BOTG there on accident...). My brain has been off most of the day. Fixed my post above.

 

[DeletedUser]

New tag..

 

[DeletedUser]

All in all, it's just too chaotic as it is, that splatter on the left is more of a focal than your actual focal

 

[DeletedUser]

All in all, it's just too chaotic as it is, that splatter on the left is more of a focal than your actual focal

you mean those water c4d's?

 

[DeletedUser104802]

wow thats amazing napoli! i dont mind much about focal but its looks cool

 

[DeletedUser]

wow thats amazing napoli! i dont mind much about focal but its looks cool

thanks

 

[DeletedUser]

you mean those water c4d's?

the yellow splattery things ?

 

[DeletedUser]

the yellow splattery things ?

Yh xD Arsys water c4d's ^^
So you mean I should dodge my focal, to make it more clear?

And a new one..

First time I made 2 tags in a week 0.o