There is a major mistake in your videos. In the text version of clickpanic he has many misspellings, many of which are phonetic errors. Meaning he is spelling the word the way it sounds. However in the video in an attempt to create the same level of audio stupidity that you had in the textual version of clickpanic you have mispronounced many words that he should be pronouncing correctly judging by his spelling.
In my opinion this error devastates the entire video attempt at trolling as he becomes largely unbelievable, and you are visibly struggling to maintain the very facade which is destroying the effect, which destroys it even further.
In summary, pronounce obvious words correctly, but with a southern accent. You can still of course maintain grammatical errors. With these changes it will vastly improve the video presence of the character.
