DeletedUser
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Structure was ok, spoilers were too. Not sure how some people found the content in the spoilers hard to read but bolded names would help as already mentioned. Constant usage of the letter 'a' instead of the word 'an' before vowels, missing capitalisation for the first letter of names, and missing apostrophe's were the eye sores. Having said that, if you can produce four blogs a month then people wont give a hoot over the mistakes.
He edited it all after our comments, trust me it was looking pretty rough originally.