Critique Thread

[DeletedUser]

I know its not what we are used to but ... what do you think of this :

What's it for?

 

[DeletedUser]

Nothing, just general art

 

[DeletedUser]

Nothing, just general art

My eye keeps getting drawn to your sig. Poor Milly. :lol:

 

[DeletedUser]

 

[DeletedUser]

Have you soft brushed the edges of yor mammoth? Or dodged them? Either way, its make it seem 2D >.< I know why you've done it, but its just un natural lighting, nice concept though

 

[DeletedUser]

The elephant is quite obviously photoshopped in there. Look where the light in the image is coming from. Also, the shadow should be of the trunk and tusks, not just a spot on the ground.

 

[DeletedUser]

Nothing, just general art

I don't know...

It's not overly interesting to look at. Is there a concept behind it?

 

[DeletedUser]

The elephant is quite obviously photoshopped in there.

it is a mammoth

 

[DeletedUser]

inspired by spann :icon_razz: (WIP)

(WIP)

 

[nindel]

inspired by spann :icon_razz: (WIP)

(WIP)

So cute! D xD

I like it, it looks like a very satisfactory piece and gives off an innocent feeling :33

Also one of the cutest images of Miku I've come across P:

 

[DeletedUser100345]

:icon_redface:

 

[DeletedUser]

Oh wow, I leave for a few months and everyone is pretty good now. D:

Edit:

inspired by spann :icon_razz: (WIP)

The splashes in the background blend into the shirt slightly. Colors on the text is similar to the entire signature, why have such small text?

 

[DeletedUser]

:icon_redface:

grad mapping is too obvious, colours should of been controlled a bit more.

 

[DeletedUser100345]

grad mapping is too obvious, colours should of been controlled a bit more.

k thx
I think I wore sunglasses, when I create this :icon_razz:

 

[DeletedUser]

 

[DeletedUser]

its great composition, but that white light is awfull. I personally think its too big, and also... why is your render centred :S

 

[DeletedUser]

why is your render centred :S

a wizard id it :icon_eek:

and i get what you mean about that white light, its bad :icon_redface:

 

[DeletedUser]

make it black and I think everything will blend much better ...

 

[DeletedUser]

better?

 

[DeletedUser]

Your comp is off (this render is working in the middle of your tag), your lighting on your render is bad and you layer masked out parts of your render in an obvious way. Sowwy to be critical >.<